This is magnificent ! love your work. Because you asked for feedback on this one, here goes.....Not one who is usualy shy of the nether regions but I would be inclined to crop this one just below her fingers because. Just my 2 cents worth.
The upper part is great- the tones, the motion...I would crop the intimate part though, it steals the photograph/idea...Imagination is like a seductress, it keeps you guessing, it keeps your imagination moving, too much information stagnates minds...just a thought.
You've manipulated the top of the image to be magical, transition in process, rolling out of focus, and then you place the vagina in focus which has drawn two comments of discomfort over this.
As the in focus area is without emotional signal, it's in contrast to the top, and it leaves the viewer without a hint of a direction to take the mind.
Why is her vagina in focus? There's no explanation or symbols or pathways to explain that.
That leaves the viewer with an unrequested requirement to address this for themselves. Two posters want to avoid dealing with the question. I just want to know why...
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This is magnificent !
love your work.
Because you asked for feedback on this one, here goes.....Not one who is usualy shy of the nether regions but I would be inclined to crop this one just below her fingers because. Just my 2 cents worth.
Mark
thank you Mark!
so appreciate it :)
this composition will make a completely diffident image, I wanted to show her raw and ...
The upper part is great- the tones, the motion...I would crop the intimate part though, it steals the photograph/idea...Imagination is like a seductress, it keeps you guessing, it keeps your imagination moving, too much information stagnates minds...just a thought.
You've manipulated the top of the image to be magical, transition in process, rolling out of focus, and then you place the vagina in focus which has drawn two comments of discomfort over this.
As the in focus area is without emotional signal, it's in contrast to the top, and it leaves the viewer without a hint of a direction to take the mind.
Why is her vagina in focus? There's no explanation or symbols or pathways to explain that.
That leaves the viewer with an unrequested requirement to address this for themselves. Two posters want to avoid dealing with the question. I just want to know why...
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